As always. When I change my mind… so does everything else.
So for the millionth time this year…Here is the latest Timetabula
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As always. When I change my mind… so does everything else.
So for the millionth time this year…Here is the latest Timetabula
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I am a promoter of having your work edited by an external editor. I firmly believe that having a second person audit the grammar, spelling an punctuation of your hard work is vital in delivering a polished product.
Hey… I make mistakes in my blog posts. I might misuse a comma, or have jumbled words that might have made sense at the time, but look like nincompooply now. But, when I come to submitting a novel or a short story, I would want to be absolutely sure that errors of such are caught early.
One useful tool for me on the Mac is the GrammarianPro tool.
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This tool contains an arsenal of professional writing tools to combat those embarrassing writing errors that everyone tends to make, a universal interactive spelling checking, grammar checking, dictionary, thesaurus, autocorrect, and autotype tool that works with virtually every program on your computer.
An impressive feature, when I remember to activate it is the “Oh” shout out, when I make a grammatical mistake. Thus alerting me instantly. Neat .
The software also comes with a statistics tool to analyse the readability of your text.
Below – taken from their site…

There are lots of grammar packages out there, and no software tool, no matter how hard they try to convince you will never be perfect.
This tool does helps me, but will never replace a real editor.
The product will set you back £38, though a 7-day free trial can be downloaded.
Out of 5… I would give this 4.
Let me tell you my schedule before I explain why I believe in Beta readers and Critiques are massively important.
Phew… that’s a lot to do… but that’s my preference.
Now, before you submit for a Beta or a critique… You’ll be thinking that your novel is brilliant and written really well. WRONG. Just because you think is is great, doesn’t mean that it actually is. Okay, sorry, for some it will be great… but a very tiny % of the writing world will get it right the first time.
The Beta/Crits will bring sensibility to your writing.
They can help with your grammar, characters, plot, dialogue and issues of continuity. It is also not uncommon for this service to be free. The improvements they can bring to your work will be appreciated. The groundwork or 90% of it is already provided by the initial manuscript, and the support they can bring is to help you uncover the 10% groundwork that you never realised was missing. Having someone look over and say “that does’t make sense, doesn’t flow or is pointless”… is so bloody important.
Comments I receive from my Beta/Crits do not change the overall feel of the novel. But they do make me look at it from a fresh pair of eyes. In the past, I have overlooked basic issues because I knew my characters, plot inside out. A new reader won’t, and the Beta/Crtis will point this out for you.
Let’s be honest here. Some Beta/Crits can be harsh and will drive a dagger into your novel. But I would rather they do that than have an agent or a reader slam-dunk my novel into the hellacious-bin-of-sin.
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Hold on… have I just jumped ship from piracy to a religious discussion. No, what I mean is that items of importance have been taken and used to suit the needs of the taker.
Come again…Someone had taken ‘something’ and used it for a purpose that it was not intended to be, let alone be taken in the first instance. In law, we call it appropriation.
Piracy happens all the time.
But is it all bad?
And we have all done it at some point? Plus, everyone else does it, so why not me?
Before I get into my opinion, and note that this is my opinion, and I would welcome yours in the comments below, let me own up to watching pirate movies.
Between the ages of 8 and 14, it was not uncommon for a VHS movie to be played of poor dire quality with crackling sound. But then, it didn’t matter if the quality sucked; it was a recently released movie, or even better, one that was not out in the UK yet. Wow! Then came the recording of music from another tape; again win, win, win. By 2000, the Internet was booming, and the downloading of music, videos, etc was an inter-global franchise with no buy-in required.
Since the age of 15, I started thinking more about the rights and wrongs of society, and one that touched a nerve with me was piracy of other people’s work. Believe me, I was a loner back than, and was often perceived as ‘abnormal’ for not embracing piracy.
The reason for why I stopped then is the same as it is now. I do not steal.
Of course, there are many that will say, “Yes I do not steal, but I don’t see the big deal about downloading movies, eBooks and music. It’s not exactly stealing per se.”
Well, actually it is… When you plagiarise, copy someone’s work, download music, etc, you are taking someone’s hard work for free. Would you be content if someone took a song that you created, broke your heart over and spent your life savings on, and distributed it across the internet for free?
And still some will say, “Yes, but we are talking about millionaires. They have made their riches. Sod them.”
Oh, right. Just because they have made their money, we can bend the term ‘stealing’.
For authors, piracy of your eBook has been deemed to be a ‘winning scenario’ because interest can be generated in ‘free-advertising’. I do not want to get into that argument, but I am concerned that many authors would be deeply upset if they lost out on income because a shrewd downloader hacked and re-distributed their novel. Even worse, their work being sold under an alternate name.
This does happen, and it is still stealing.
At work, someone gladly announced how they have purchased 5,000 eBooks off eBay for a measly low sum, and their content included all of the Harry Potter books. Erm… hang on, they aren’t available as eBooks unless you are hooked into Pottermore.
The person’s reply; “Who cares, I have them and I have so much more.”
And that’s just it. Because the author is mega-rich, it doesn’t matter how you got it.
I differ greatly because, in Manchester 2004, 23 low-paid workers died in appalling conditions when seeking cockleshells for gang-masters. When the police raided some of their homes, they found that most were behind a large network of providing pirate movies onto the Internet.
Some will say; “Yes, but I get mine off a sharing site and that has nothing to do with criminal kingpins.”
Really… and how sure are you of that?
Now, let me return to the Harry Potter eBooks… I am going to assume that someone has re-typed the novel to make them distributable. Now who would have done that? A student? A retired person who is finger quick? Or maybe, a low paid, beaten, abused individual in a third-world country. I don’t know, but what if the latter were true?
Do you still not care how that eBook came to be?
When someone makes a movie, a song, a book, an image, then a part of them is plugged into it. And for that, they deserve to receive an income. Forget who is rich or poor. If they have worked for it, they deserve something for it.
If we take without caring for how it got there, then we can’t complain when someone takes something personal of yours.
We take products off the millionaires because they have more than we do.
Really?
Stealing is stealing.
What is not rightfully yours can never be yours.
I work hard for what I do. And if I ever get published, I do not want my hard-work, or the money I have invested in editing, critiquing, setting up a website and using every spare moment of time… to be abused.
Got asked to create a web-banner for a co-author Anne Michaud
@Annemichaud on Twitter
…and here it is in Tim Burton-esque style
What do you think? Hmmm..maybe I should design these…
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Web Banner below..
3 Days later than planned, I completed my first edit of Disconnect… and with that the second draft.
Some minor plot changes have been made but overall the arcs of the two protagonists are unaltered. I know that no matter how hard I edit, there will be grammatical errors galore, but I am confident in my external editor picking those up for me. And I will learn from that.
To round off some stats;
Times change, so does my timetabula.
The process of writing can be a long one, and after it is complete, the additional analysis you can apply depends upon yourself. I always aim to edit as professionally as possible, but with that comes the burden of cost and time.
Thus, here is the timetabula with approximate costs for some important stages. (No doubt they will go up)
Note: Disconnect was written during May to July. And my personal edit started in Mid-July with a view to be completed by Mid-August. Apply that to the next batch of stages, and you ‘ll get an idea of my method and time to completion… It is a long one isn’t it…
Remember, it’s not all work… and I do plan small breaks to fit in between some stages.
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The many faces of me… though none are two-faced…
I am many, but still just one.
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Well, sometimes I blog, and then sometimes I go quiet. I have a reason; I was editing like a ninja bunny running on stabbiness attitude-adrenaline. You see, knowing that I was 10k down on my word count, I had to revisit the previous 10 chapters to ensure I was cutting correctly and to attack the next load of chapters in the same ethos.
During this time a sudden change took place. The novel has grown from 17 chapters to 21.
The cause of this was because I read some chapters and thought “Hmmm… this deserves to be amplified on its own” thus the extra 4.
So.. let me now break it down on some of the changes that have taken place from Chapter 11 to 17;